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Postby AD35 » Mon Jul 10, 2006 3:10 pm

I just wanted to know what other people thought about this wallpaper I just made...it's my 2nd attempt :wacko:


Suzumiya Haruhi

I like comments, good or bad, so please tell me what you guys think.

edit: Changed link to the imageshack.....didn't resize and it looks big =)
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Postby Cataulin » Mon Jul 10, 2006 3:13 pm

Man that thing is small. How big is it really?
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Postby AD35 » Mon Jul 10, 2006 3:17 pm

It's 600 kbs, and it's the 1024x768.... I don't know why it's resizing....gonna try to fix it

Here's the jpg version...see if this helps http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v51/Animedude35/Haruhi1.jpg

Okay I tried posting on imageshack...see how this looks Here
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Postby EvilSquirrel » Mon Jul 10, 2006 4:12 pm

make the Haruhi image fade out on the right side. Edge in the middle of the wall = uglees.
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Postby Komataguri » Mon Jul 10, 2006 4:20 pm

Just some constructive critizism..


I don't like how you cut off half her ear on the left side, move her to the right a little bit, or completely get rid of the ear.

The text color at the top is horrible, and not very in cue with the color scheme


Same with the text on the bottom left, and the shadow effect is just bad.

Text on the right..image wise, isn't that bad, altho I think you could do without it since alot of us liek very clean desktops.


Other than that, tho..I think its a great start.
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Postby AD35 » Mon Jul 10, 2006 5:27 pm

EvilSquirrel wrote:make the Haruhi image fade out on the right side. Edge in the middle of the wall = uglees.


Yeah, the edges bugged me alot, but I didn't know how to get rid of it other than bluring it out manually. Thanks for the suggestion.


Komataguri wrote:Just some constructive critizism..


I don't like how you cut off half her ear on the left side, move her to the right a little bit, or completely get rid of the ear.

The text color at the top is horrible, and not very in cue with the color scheme

Same with the text on the bottom left, and the shadow effect is just bad.

Text on the right..image wise, isn't that bad, altho I think you could do without it since alot of us liek very clean desktops.


Other than that, tho..I think its a great start.


The right ear part, it was already cut out to begin with the image I had, I could've reconstructed the ear, but my skill levels are not that far yet :swt:

I thought the colors were a bit off, but it was easy on the eyes, so I left it in there, but thanks for the info, so I won't use it next time with the same background color scheme.

I was thinking it was TOO clean on the right side, so I inserted the text. I didn't know if people wanted more crowded wallpaper or less. I'm guessing less =)

Thanks for the suggestions, I might make a version 2 for it if people want it with the added suggestions here.

Thanks again!

Here's the edited version with the suggestions above, I kepted the orange name at the bottom, but everything else is cleaned up.

Also, I didn't know how to fade out only the right side, so I faded the border around the haruhi image.

Tell me what you guys think of v2:

Haruhi V2 The clean one
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Postby shrag » Tue Jul 11, 2006 5:52 am

i just think u should try fix the left side of her head so it goes out past the white blur edge
by reconstruct or by cutting the side ... it may be hard ... and others may like it as it is, but whatever ^^
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Postby AD35 » Wed Jul 12, 2006 3:26 am

I have a new wallpaper ready for viewing.....

It's a lot cleaner and I hope you guys like it.

Asahina Mikuru (from MoHS again)

And again, all comments, questions, concerns are welcome.


BTW: Forgot to mention that i'm using gimp as my editor :swt:
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Postby shrag » Wed Jul 12, 2006 4:30 am

nice.... your sig at the bottom? .... else just take them away ... the cleaner the better in my opinion :D .... at least when it comes to characterwallpapers
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Postby Chiisu » Wed Jul 12, 2006 6:04 am

That background's a little plain, and you might wanna blend the font a little more. But then again, I don't know anything about Gimp, other then it's free.
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Postby AD35 » Wed Jul 12, 2006 9:23 pm

I now have a v2 of the Mikuru wallpaper up for viewing so tell me what you guys think:

Mikuru v2
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Postby Cataulin » Thu Jul 13, 2006 12:59 am

that red border is not cool. also when you have that second Mikuru in the back. Just leave her transparent with out that fade( I see why you used the color fade tho you need a bigger pic of Mikuru). also get rid of teh text. if its not part of teh background most people wont like it.
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