garbage pics XD

[subaru]

everything in this forum is my original character

still learning so~ need a lot of CnC

[silverace99]

very cool?

reminds me of holic.

[frumplstlskn]

By the way you acted in the other thread, I don't think you'd take kindly to real critique. You'd sit there and defend your drawings and then go cry on Deviantart.

[subaru]

i will take kindly with any critics about my art, this topic it's differ from other kind of topic that i posted, i'm not crying on DA, i have DA acc, why i posted here? because i want to get more critic from differ person

i just think, why do i always do something wrong in this forum? if you say my art is bad/good, give me some reasons, i will take it n accept it, even though if we have bad relationship in other topic, i don't mind with that

did i said that i refused your critic? i just had posted 1 picture and this is my second post, how come you can judge me like that?

[frumplstlskn]

I would judge you like that because I've seen it one hundred times, it's quite common.

Everything is elongated. You should learn correct human proportion and anatomy. Anime is not a good starting point if you are serious about your art.

It lacks good, strong composition. The eye has nowhere to rest and no focal point. I can't really tell what's going on. Is she lying down, because there are a lo of wrinkles in the background that suggest it.

I see you used Photoshop brushes... unless used very cleverly or you handmade them, avoid these like the plague.

Don't colour every piece that you draw, I don't know that you do, but if you classify this as garbage and it's coloured, then you probably do. Only colour your best work. No point in, "polishing the stone" or "putting sugar on shit".

There's probably more to say but I'll leave it at that.

[subaru]

oh okay, thanks, i better see you post your critic.. and i appreciated that..

yeah~ i still bad in proportion, that's why i need a LOT of critics to fix that, i just used erase, brush, and dodge in this picture. and this is my second picture by photoshop

again, thanks you for your critic ^^

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[KasugaSan]

these girls look so thin
they need to eat more....

[subaru]

for the first one i agree with you, but the second one, i don't think so

[silverace99]

in the second one their legs ARE way too skinny haha

[KasugaSan]

are they attempting to do tribadism?
at least I think the rabbit girl is...

well my point is...their posture doesn't seems to make any sense... they don't look like they're falling jumping or whatever

[Ris]

are they attempting to do tribadism?

i have NO idea what that is but i get the feeling it will be sexier for kasuga to tell me

[Yumi]

Everything is elongated

I knew elongated was a word!

[Singyz]

are they attempting to do tribadism?

i have NO idea what that is but i get the feeling it will be sexier for kasuga to tell me

So you're telling me that Kusaga knows tribadism...and yet you, a male doesn't? It boggles the mind!!!!

[frumplstlskn]

Everything is elongated

I knew elongated was a word!

Glad I was able to clear that up for you.